Could I smile a li'l more?
Now that the joy has returned
After miles and miles of dry dirt
The tides have now turned!
I see, in every nook, a shining star
Awaiting me with open arms
I see sun joy laughter bliss
Oh! The world has renewed its charms!
A million new dremas have woken from their buds
And all those old ones have been dusted and cleaned
Life once more, is on a rhapsodic song
Everything is lovely and beautiful, indeed!
PHOTO COURTESY: Project Gutenberg 'THE STORY OF MY LIFE- RECOLLECTIONS AND REFLECTIONS' by Ellen Terry
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hey the picture is down
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Hi Sandhya, may I point some little changes that might brush away at a few edges of this poem:
The world has renewed its charms
Consider: The world has renewed charms.
A million new dremas have woken from their buds
And all those old ones have been dusted and cleaned
Life once more, is on a rhapsodic song
Everything is lovely and beautiful, indeed!
Consider:
A million new dreams wake from their buds
And those of yore are dusted and cleaned
Life once more, takes on a rhapsodic song
Everything is lovely and beautiful, indeed!
Warm Regards,
Ceruleus
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